pressure // a poem
pressure builds
crushing me
and you don't bat an eye
pressure builds
forcing me
to put myself aside
pressure builds
choking me
until I start to cry
but you don't see
don't care
as long as I stay in line
~ ace / 28.03.20
pressure builds
crushing me
and you don't bat an eye
pressure builds
forcing me
to put myself aside
pressure builds
choking me
until I start to cry
but you don't see
don't care
as long as I stay in line
~ ace / 28.03.20
You have a simple and direct style that I like very much. Poetry says it best when it says it in very few words, the fewer the better. You've got this down.
Hey you just inspired that bit so thank you very much I will be using it.
Thank you, and that's beautiful! I'm getting back into poetry so I appreciate the encouragement :)