Poetry Slam Challenge 6: Please (Free Verse)

in #poetry8 years ago

Please
Put down the bottle
Drink my love unconditional
Me
The only one
Who's heard your heart from inside
It beats in time with mine
Remember when you held me
Until the tears abated
Tied my shoes
Brushed my hair
Happy memories faded
My every move
Reflected you
Your broken mirror
I'll always carry
And the pieces of me
Tied to what remains
Please
Stop shouting
I hear it
Sleep ever eluding
The tug of war
You and him
The little in the middle
Perfect weapon
I have to go
Far from your guilt
Your lonely
Breaks my heart
I'm not like you
I love you
Whats real?
I don't know
Not this
I love you
Please
Put down the bottle

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Very good post!

Thank you!

upvoted! awesome. i really love poetry. you could check mine and give me a critic :-) https://steemit.com/poetry/@annesaya/youth-s-dim-light-a-poem-original