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RE: POETRY CONTEST - Runaway Rhymes 6: First or Worst

in #poetry7 years ago (edited)

First love

I saw her in front of lab
I felt a feeling fab,
I did a little dab
And took her number slab,
Than we did some talking
And went on a little walking,
Ocassionaly did some stalking
When my heart went on hawking,
Then I took her on a date
Omelette was that we ate,
We got a little late
As we let the clocking blate,
We went on travels together
sharing moments we will miss ever,
The Love the feelings will last forever
But she can't be mine ever. 😖

Love all... All of this just came out in a flow :)

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Nice flow, keep on flowing, you have the knack.

Thank you very much.... :)

Wonderful I also love when poems come to me in a flow.

Thank you.. .. I Would love to read some of your poetry :)