Ottava Rima - poem

in #poetry7 years ago (edited)

Hello everyone, this is my first post on steemit and i would like to share my first post with a ottava rima poem and i hope enjoy. :) 


My feelings erupt and flare inside of me, 

Emotions bubble up inside of my soul, 

My feelings form like leaves falling off a tree, 

My emotions dig a hole and find some coal, 

My stomach fills with rage and anger with bees, 

Feeling warmed up, I need a fire control, 

You think you need someone but you need yourself ,

But put all your old books in your old bookshelf .   

by amethyst :) 


This poem might sound very interesting and different but really that’s what poems are about, it’s meant to make you think. 

Be hide the meaning of my poem is always be strong and never giving up also don’t get stuck on what people are saying because it doesn’t matter and don’t let your anger push you to do something that you will regret and always think positive and give positive and you will get positive bake. :)   

THINK POSITIVE

GIVE POSITIVE

TAKE POSITIVE,  

Stay tuned in and follow me for great content and positive minds and ideas :)   

Thank you 

by: amethyst

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Ottava I have the privilege of being your first follower . Please follow me back. It is a wonderful poem with a deep meaning.

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