One could perversely say that eyes have grown blind because of their own inherent maturity. Interesting poem, both for depth and brevity. Upvote given.
One could perversely say that eyes have grown blind because of their own inherent maturity. Interesting poem, both for depth and brevity. Upvote given.
Nice addition! Thanks
Welcome. Bliss is interesting word, very sound. Coming from Slavic background, i am immediately reminded of Polish word blisko , though its meaning entirely different from English bliss. This is another highlight of your poem for me.