POEM - EVAPORATING COLOURS

in #poetry7 years ago (edited)

A vast ivory curtain draped over silver rods,
flowing gracefully across the range,
gradually drifting,
rolling over mountains,
suffocating distant arrow tips,
riding swiftly across the valleys
Mountains vanish without a whisper,
the bloodless charcoal curtain,
a silent, deadly vapour

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I like the extensive imagery used throughout the poem and the contemplating aspect of the final line. Thank you for sharing.

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I like the final line, too, but it's "the bloodless charcoal curtain" that has me thinking.

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