You are viewing a single comment's thread from:

RE: The Larvae of Love

in #poetry • 6 years ago

WOWZA. You captured SO well the ache, the pain, the overwhelming all consuming... FEELS of love. I am left breathless just form reading it.

6 years ago in #poetry by
$0.02
  • Past Payouts $0.02, 0.00 TRX
  • - Author $0.02, 0.00 TRX
  • - Curators $0.01, 0.00 TRX
1 vote
Reply 2
Sort:  
  • Trending
    • [-]
     6 years ago 

    Thanks Byn!

    After writing the first stanza, I wondered where to take it. After I finished writing it, I thought I'd need to write another version at some point, without the humorous side to it, and just make it fully serious.

    But even before your comment, I started thinking that it also accomplishes that route, of being overtaken, consumed, by love, and that how humorous or not you read it as is up to you as a reader. Your comment does help me feel like I've succeeded in that.

    Thank you :)

    $0.02
    • Past Payouts $0.02, 0.00 TRX
    • - Author $0.02, 0.00 TRX
    • - Curators $0.00, 0.00 TRX
    1 vote
    Reply
    [-]
     6 years ago 

    Maybe I've been married way too long and maybe I enjoy humor in life, but I thought it was so potent and realistic that even the humor bits fit well for my tastes!