SteemitPoetryContest #8- MIND TRIP

in #poetry • 7 years ago (edited)

She came out of the waters
She was naked, looking reborn
She checked if there were others
I was the only one

Approaching me as I approached her
I was in another world
And when I tried to hold her
She shifted and then hurled

Irresistible, I gripped her
but it seem'd she dissappeared
And i heard her voice, a whisper
"This was all just in your head"

Thanks @steemitpoetrycontest. Theme for #8 poem is 'illusions'. An illusion is anything that seems to be something that it is not.

The poem written above just narrates an instance where the poet persona is illusively caught up with a female person who perplexes him. Thanks.

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