This was pretty awesome!

I was just wondering earlier this morning if I would be able to write poetry in that style. I've never really tried. You nailed it, it really feels like a rap. And I love the positivity.

Great job!

By the way, I was wondering if you could do me a huge favor by popping over to @kid4life's talent challenge voting post here and casting your vote. I'm one of eight finalists, and the prize is pretty awesome. It's neck and neck. All you have to do is comment your "vote." I would super appreciate it! Thanks, @lymmerik!