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RE: Wait a Little While

in #poetry7 years ago

The words remind me of a song by Cliff Richards

If I said I loved you
What would you say?
If I said I needed you
Would it frighten you away?
If I said I loved you
And I wanted you to be
My one and only lover
Eternally.

Not the same, but the feel. Your poem could be put to similar style of music.

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I see what you mean - I know that song and yes it could be interpreted in that style :)