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RE: Good mourning! (V. 2)

in #poetry6 years ago (edited)

Ah, really? That's interesting! I wonder if I shouldn't tamper too much with old stuff, might lose the original flavor. Not that anything is lost since both of them are recorded :-) Maybe some other people will weigh in on which they prefer, too—or even be bold enough to offer specific critiques!

Thanks @whack.science, have a great day too!

P.S. crossposting ftw!

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Well, it's just my humble noob-poetic opinion :D Both are just great, but I read this one and went back to old one, and old just seemed more direct so it stuck to me more than the new one.

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I definitely value that opinion :-) I wouldn't call it noob! :-P