Weekly Update For 100 Days of Poetry Challenge (Week 14)

@mrbreeziewrites (56https://steemit.com/steemitschoolpoetry/@nicholas83/re-mrbreeziewrites-100-day-poetry-challenge-day-88-poetry-life-is-for-all-3024beac0b91d-20180605t060516260z

nicholas83 (56) 7 years ago

Dear @d-pend. I have not been given any assignments. Despite this I have gone ahead and critiqued the following:

@corderosiete
https://steemit.com/poetry/@corderosiete/family-trips-original-poem-100-days-poetry-challenge-day-89-poem-87#@corderosiete/re-nicholas83-re-corderosiete-family-trips-original-poem-100-days-poetry-challenge-day-89-poem-87-20180605t081316860z

@zeleiracordero
https://steemit.com/poetry/@zeleiracordero/now-that-i-m-a-slip-ahora-que-soy-un-desliz-100-days-of-poetry-day-88#@zeleiracordero/re-nicholas83-re-zeleiracordero-now-that-i-m-a-slip-ahora-que-soy-un-desliz-100-days-of-poetry-day-88-20180605t120555786z

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sayee (66) 7 years ago

wow, last week. when I started this, I never knew if I would be able to complete it because of various factors. You have given us all the opportunity to remain dedicated and stick to the schedule by being the leading light.

The poets assigned to me were @dmilliz and @hazem91
A Choice (day 90) by @hazem91

and Peering into the ether ( 100 Days of Poetry ) {Day #89} by @dmilliz

and my weekly find is @dmilliz poem Peering into the ether ( 100 Days of Poetry ) {Day #89}

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corderosiete (53) 7 years ago

The two poets assigned were @ayahkasih and @mineopoly

These are the comments that I left in the poems

1st). @ayahkasih
(Day 88) HEART STILL BEATING HARDLY BREATHING
https://steemit.com/steemitschoolpoetry/@ayahkasih/steemit-school-poetry-100-day-challenge-day-88-heart-still-beating-hardly-breathing

2nd) @mineopoly
(Day 89) Basil Life
https://steemit.com/philosophy/@mineopoly/basil-life

The most outstanding poem I read “Tracks” by @firststeps
https://steemit.com/poetry/@firststeps/tracks-day-88

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zeleiracordero (67) 7 years ago

Greetings @d-pend and poets companions.I hug you all.

Having fulfilled the pending task, I present my results. The poets that were assigned to me this week were: @skodie and @mrbreeziewrites.

By @mrbreeziewrites
"Disappointment"
https://steemit.com/steemitschoolpoetry/@mrbreeziewrites/100-day-poetry-challenge-day-86-poetry-disappointment-d5fcb72bc3781

By @skodie
"One way street"
https://steemit.com/poetry/@skodie/day-87-one-way-street

Findings of the week
By @firststeps
"Full Circle" - Day 89. I loved the crescendo musicality of this poem, because it has a connection with the theme: rising violence in the world.
https://steemit.com/poetry/@firststeps/full-circle-day-89

By @ayahkasih
Love is never really new. I was attracted to the way in which the cycle of life as a couple is treated, the difficult coexistence, the solitude that accompanies the lack of coupling. How coexistence kills passionate love.
https://steemit.com/steemitschoolpoetry/@ayahkasih/steemit-school-poetry-100-day-challenge-day-90-love-is-never-really-new

By @prydefoltz
Become Elemental, Day 90. This poem seduced my mind with its symbology and intentional didactic. Your message is a teaching.
https://steemit.com/poetry/@prydefoltz/become-elemental-day-90-of-the-100-days-of-poetry

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blessedben (49) 7 years ago

The two poets assigned to me were @firststeps and @rexdickson

I commented on @firststep's Day's Last Breath.

I also commented on @rexdickson's Would You Still Love Me?.

My pick for the week is @firststep's Day's last breath

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firststeps (46) 7 years ago

Thanks for the pick and the feedback. I’m glad you liked it. I’m really trying to stretch my craft beyond rhyme.

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acousticsteveo (61) 7 years ago

This week I had @blessedben and chose to comment here: https://steemit.com/poetry/@blessedben/clinical-cleansing-sspc-88

I also had @firststeps and commented here: https://steemit.com/poetry/@blessedben/clinical-cleansing-sspc-88

My pick of the week was here: https://steemit.com/poetry/@moonsoleil/19-rehab

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trucklife-family (72) 7 years ago

Hi @d-pend and all you lovely poets, really excited to be in our last week, well done everyone one.
I was assigned @spellmaker and @sammynathaniels
For @spellmaker I chose Whole And One
https://steemit.com/steemitschoolpoetry/@spellmaker/day-88-of-100-whole-and-one
and for @sammynathaniels I chose 'Of Blood and Bones'
https://steemit.com/steemitschoolpoetry/@sammynathaniels/of-blood-and-bones-day-88
both of these poems are amazing, that you to both poets for creating them xx
My find of the week, I have 2 actually, was hard to pick between them both but 1st is @theverve with this gem of a poem
https://steemit.com/steemitschoolpoetry/@theverve/100-days-of-poetry-challenge-day-90
and 2nd is @spellmaker with 'Receiving Perception'
https://steemit.com/steemitschoolpoetry/@spellmaker/day-87-of-100-receiving-perception
Thanks so much @d-pend, this challenge has been so good for me and I have so loved being so creative and expressive everyday, thank you for that gift xxx

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https://steemit.com/poetry/@corderosiete/a-wish-to-a-shooting-star-original-poem-100-days-poetry-challenge-day-90-poem-88

mineopoly (64) 7 years ago (edited)

Thank you for putting up with this motley crew of poets for almost 100 days. Luckily there was no hair pulling. I will be the first to admit that encouragement from the 100 day poetry challenge kept me posting for the past three months.

During the past week I was assigned to my brother @corderosiete. He has supported me through encouraging comments and wisdom throughout this poetic journey. I was moved by his post “A shooting Star”. The poem seems to me a journey into his greatest dreams and wishes. I invite you all to read @corderosite’s poems. We all know he has been active in engaging dialogue through this poetic journey. Es realmente un honor conocerte y leer tus poemas. Muchas gracias por compartir tu sabiduría con nosotros. Espero las mejores bendiciones para tu familia.

I met a new poet this week @ayahkasih. Penyair Majenun is from Indonesia and whenever I think it is hot in Korea this summer I can remember it is hotter there. These poems are also hot and touch the nature of existence and relationships. In this poem Penyair pens the heart one who in desperation believed outlandish promises with strings attached.

https://steemit.com/steemitschoolpoetry/@ayahkasih/school-poetry-100-day-challenge-day-93-outlandish-promises

I noticed @prydefoltz has had a great week and is giving her best effort to engage poets into a community. It seems like she enjoys it. One of her poems stood out among the rest:

https://steemit.com/@prydefoltz/become-elemental-day-90-of-the-100-days-of-poetry

Feeling sentimental... ㅠㅠ

I know this is probably against the rules...

but I like my poem "The Emperor's New Post."

Five more days!!

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