Love In Valhalla

in #poetry7 years ago
  • We open the door of a new life, launch the magic walls of our past. Brave warriors defend the honor of their family, bloody fairy tales inspire new love on the hands of the altar. Happiness has found a new path in the fascinating beauty of your movements.


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  • A great forest in the word of clever minds, we overcome the thoughts of the stars of our childhood, you are the hidden secret of the greatest knowledge of my heart. New steps signify the bright fighting of our passion - You are the magic of my thoughts.

  • We open new horizons of the avatars, we pass through the storm of the vortex of the silver wall - for your beauty we all dream fairy tales. We sacrifice days and nights at the limit of spiritual cognition, ships sail to the islands of pleasure -wealth is open in the deep heart of pure eyes.

  • Through millennium rings of time
    Godly thunders with heroic rhime

  • Not forgoten nor lost at all dear Atlana
    Eternity Love will endure in Glorious Valhalla


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Good poetry @dobartim. At least the last two stanzas are good. The first two seem more like the start of an interesting story. You choose your pictures well.

Thank you for support and kind comment.

It moves ocean and ion mountains as there is no obstacle for true love

Napred...

nice.

Which part did you find was the nicest, and why?

Beautiful input! Deep & alluring!

Valhala it is.
Strong and masterly
One of best poem that i have read completely
@dobartim you are real Goresnjakov son
Moving, thrilling and glorifying life and love

Good work

Why do you think it was so good?

This is my mother

nice post

What was the most nice about it?

Son from my brother. Thank you for education

Where is Valhalla

in the haven

Hi dobartium.. Amazing poetry with amazing picx n thanx for sharing.. You are good poet with magic powers of pen..