Poetry love unexpected

in #poetry • 7 years ago

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Why happen to self
I was fascinated for a moment to see a idol
Her style is captivating
she thought

Myself why
my steps became a little embarrassed
When I saw sidia smile
Tear to me laugh me
I'm ashamed

Does he know now?
Heart spread at heart
Does he understand?
desire of love in self
God help me
The one who was in love
To her

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     7 years ago 

    This isn't bad at all. Give it more time and watch your writing skills improve. Don't give up even if you don't see immediate results.

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