Natures hold on me

in #poetry7 years ago (edited)

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Maybe it's her beauty
maybe her chaos
maybe her ability to choose if you live or die
whatever it may be
it brings me a certain feeling of
Peace
The feeling of death she gives
so beautiful
I stand here and feel her power
I know simply to follow
You have no strength here my dear friend
She is a Tyrant
she is your goddess now
kneel down and feel her mercy
she will leave you weak
broken
Just as you stood tall;


A little free verse just for fun
This is one of my first poems I've shown anyone . I use to write a lot in school
always use to compare my ex to nature (that's who this poem is based on.)
I know it is not great but hey.

PLEASE check out @xxsenpaixsamaxx he introduced me to the platform and writes a million times better than I do.
He is an inspiration to me.

The photo was taken by me when I was on holiday. I always seem to be at peace near the ocean.

Thank you for listening
Michael Howatt

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A really awesome poem my good friend
I really didn't want it to end,
The imagery was great,
Every emotion real, nothing fake.

Continue to keep it up bud, I really enjoyed the poem. Thanks for the shout out!

Thank you so much. I know it could be better but for a first public one I'm pretty happy. I'll keep at it and hopefully my content gets better.