Poem I

in #poetry7 years ago

Hello stranger,
Take your clothes off
Piece by piece
undress
the expectations
you bought off
assembly lines
and even though
it hurts
rub the paint off,
the mask with
all your excuses
Wash, wash, wash
until lies are gone
Who is left?

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Nice poem, and lovely photo! Ive just joined and going to post photos of my travels :) would be great if you could follow :)

Looks like you've visited some awesome places so far man! Followed :)

Happy to hear you like it Ryan! Welcome to the community, look forward to seeing what you will be putting up later :)

we hide behind many superficial things... yet what is it that lies underneath it all? Great poem ^.^

Thank you so much! Hopefully we as individuals, as a community and most of all as humankind will be able to take more steps towards discovering that :)