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RE: Cries... (Poem)

in #poetry6 years ago

Hi there.
Good poem. Made me think about distasteful medicines; things we don't like, but we must take sometimes.
Truth be told, some people cry more than others. I guess some have more reasons to; others develop mechanisms to turn sadness into at least a neutral gray, i guess; still others find ways to turn happy moments into frustrating chaos and then cry.
I think that not all crying becomes an internal hemorrhage, though. Some crying can be liberating, even therapeutic. Crying may be the first step towards healing and moving on.

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Thank you so much for reading this. I really appreciate your comment. I write this because sometimes I feel like I want to cry, and I just can't. So, with these lines I'm letting go all the tears I keep inside.

And that's a good thing. Writing, like crying, can also be therapeutic. Any writer will agree with that.
Keep doing it; keep exploring and I'm sure you'll find a voice that will be greater, more powerful than the sum of all your pains.

I'll agree with you. I'll keep writing. Thank you :)

@snowy-june,

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