This poem really shows your respect for nature in a great way (if I got it right).
I really like your style of writing. Even though I often have to read it more than three times to understand everything since English is not my first language and I have to translate certain words to German :D. But your diverse use of words just shows me how much more there is to learn for me so I can understand the true meaning of poems in this language.
Keep on writing such great poems! :)
Wow, I appreciate your persistence! Your attitude in the face of a challenge is admirable. Many thanks!