Mirabel and The Mad Hater

in #poetry7 years ago

pm1-17052017091950.jpg Mirabel;
Locked in a frizzly combat with her Sanity
To see the worst but never to tell
Puzzled looks and screams of perplexity
You left her, and now the cat is hers to bell.

Mirabel;
Silently wishing for a miracle
In desperate worship
She sings the sweet song of depression
And casts her bet on the Mad hater's war ship
Let it Spin!
Let it Spin!
In a town of Mad Men,
Mirabel is queen.
Let it Spin!
Let it Spin!
The royal anthem
Mirabel is queen.

Mirabel;
basked in the warmth of her misery
She has become one with her pain
And in that moment of self discovery
She yearns to be sane.
But?
It spun already,
And she watched it spin,
we all did.
And now she's queen,
and her's, a kingdom of hearts.

Mirabel;
There's no way back
She wears the Crown
And bares the Mad man's mark.

(image source)
http://kathmandupost.ekantipur.com/printedition/news/2017-05-17/memories-and-melancholy.html

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Nice words put together...I like the flow

Thanks! I'm waiting for you to upvote!

Good one, the image source should be at the bottom of the picture, I think it is better that way. But I still respect your opinion though

Thanks ♥
I'll be show to do that next time

Interesting. Poetry at its best.

Thanks, I'm glad u found it interesting

Thats a wonderful work done there.i really do appreciate u

Thank you, I'm glad u liked it

@iwritealot, I like the placement of your image. I don't really like poems, but as a literary critic, I can't resist saying that this is cool.

What I really love most is your diction and the use of repetition.

Keep it up baby.

Oh my... Thanks a lot