I can sense the pain and anger, in the poem although it's a bit direct the simple English applied makes it very beautiful to read, I also enjoy the world play and imageries.
It's a fantastic poem buddy
I can sense the pain and anger, in the poem although it's a bit direct the simple English applied makes it very beautiful to read, I also enjoy the world play and imageries.
It's a fantastic poem buddy
I'm glad you enjoyed it. This was just a total stream of consciousness poem. Thanks!