Haha, this is awesome Guy! I don't think I've read a more subversive take on love - you made my skin crawl and my heart reach out all at once.
Haha, this is awesome Guy! I don't think I've read a more subversive take on love - you made my skin crawl and my heart reach out all at once.
Glad you liked it, and that it made you chuckle!
I think there are more subversive takes, sadly, they are often serious - choking "love" poems. I've seen them.
But here, it's all about the butterfly wings! After the larvae cocoons and hatches ;-)
And just you wait till you see "My Penis is a Gun," a slightly satirical take on spoken word slam-poetry, which is waiting for someone to have the time and muse to record it before I share it :D