Be Partakers
sober up! cease this disgust caused by excess
and awake from your vapidity
so much you love this banality
so much you give yourself to death
while you have a mouth to drink from the cup of Immortality
depart from this road of diminished Light
and embrace your word
with your spirited larynx
depart from the dark path
be partakers of Immortality
Interesting use of words
I like it, and agree with the general sentiment of what you are saying - too many and drawn to death, or the repetition and sluggishness that draws you into it.
Thanks! So glad you relate with this post too