Heartless, An Original Poem

in #poetry7 years ago (edited)

Can I even love
or was it all a lie ?
Am I being silly
or did my heart die ?

Did it pass away
thanks to all the pain ?
Or was it never there
guess the result is the same..

Is it in my head ?
That my heart feels dead ?
Or is it the truth,
am I a poet or a brute ?

I always thought
that love was my boss.
But isn't it weird,
I don't mourn your loss ?

Replacing you.
Replacing her.
Replacing her
with someone new.

Maybe I am
truly heartless ?
Guess I'll fit in
with this world in darkness..

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Love the subject matter here, these are thoughts I've struggled with.

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Nice bruv. Nice piece.....at least i've understood one poem today. I'm still learning from this platform. Not sure with the voting and all that. One thing i've learnt also is that you should add sources to your pictures. like this: [source] (image url).

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You could upvote if you liked it :)

Thanks. Now I know if its free of copyright then I am good to go. But how do you tell if its free of copyright?

Everything on Pixabay is :)

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Very nice one man. I really like the simplicity of the words and the flow ... God Bless You. Peace and Love.

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