mild sensations

in #poetry7 years ago

mild sensations

these mild sensations are dangerous,
for as the sun sets, he forgets
all his worries and hurries
to write and express and confess.

©LukaKorba

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With love,
Luka.

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Beautiful, no words to say but its good. :-)

Thank you! I appreciate that.

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Inspiration.

This is great. My mind got snagged on "all his worries and hurries" and I had to go back and re-read.

I like that you included the hand-written version, too.

Thank you so much! I’m glad you enjoyed it. I added it to capture the raw moment in which this piece was created.