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RE: in light n' mental fog [Day 54]
Wow!! @d-pend. I am a little afraid to make a comment. I have decided to write this comment first and then bring it through a translator and comment again.
First, I love your use of punctuation. I am always confused and just threw them out but now you used every punctuation I know of.
Second, you have an original thought inspired by your paradoxical mind:
fair in love and war,
unfair in dissolution and art.
Finally the message of the poem hits home as we throw words around a lot without much thought. When this poetry competition is over I may take another round of media fasting. Just to learn to be quiet again.
Here is my cheetah comment as well:
Wow!! @ d-pend. I am afraid to leave a comment. I decided to write this comment first, then import it back through the translator and comments.
First, I like to use punctuation. I have always been confused and thrown away, but now I have used all the punctuation I know.
Second, you have a creative idea inspired by a paradoxical mind.
Finally, the poem's message hits the house, throwing words around many words without much thought. Once this competition is over, I can have another media hiatus. We must learn to be quiet again.
This made me laugh so hard @mineopoly. Just hit me at the perfect time. Thank you 😂😂😂😂😂
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