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RE: in light n' mental fog [Day 54]

in #poetry7 years ago

Wow!! @d-pend. I am a little afraid to make a comment. I have decided to write this comment first and then bring it through a translator and comment again.

First, I love your use of punctuation. I am always confused and just threw them out but now you used every punctuation I know of.

Second, you have an original thought inspired by your paradoxical mind:

fair in love and war,
unfair in dissolution and art.

Finally the message of the poem hits home as we throw words around a lot without much thought. When this poetry competition is over I may take another round of media fasting. Just to learn to be quiet again.

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Here is my cheetah comment as well:

Wow!! @ d-pend. I am afraid to leave a comment. I decided to write this comment first, then import it back through the translator and comments.

First, I like to use punctuation. I have always been confused and thrown away, but now I have used all the punctuation I know.

Second, you have a creative idea inspired by a paradoxical mind.

In fairness in love and war,
It is unfair in dissolution and art.

Finally, the poem's message hits the house, throwing words around many words without much thought. Once this competition is over, I can have another media hiatus. We must learn to be quiet again.

This made me laugh so hard @mineopoly. Just hit me at the perfect time. Thank you 😂😂😂😂😂