RE: I Want to Live and Die in Your Arms

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moeknows (60)in #poetry • 7 years ago

Nice. I don't typically dig the repeated verses, but it worked well within this poem. I especially liked this line:

I want to bury my face in your hair
Inhale your mystery

Thanks for sharing this.

7 years ago in #poetry by moeknows (60)

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johnjgeddes (75) 7 years ago

you're welcome. I didn't like repetition for the longest time, but it can form a cadence if it's simply not xerox reprising of lines.

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