Freedom - Original Poem

in #poetry7 years ago

Tentatively, poking and prodding

Lightly

Wisps of freedom

Tenuous

Floating, just a little

Heady

Tempered by truth

Mutable

Grounded in reality

Unhinged

Now unbound

Released

Freedom slips lightly

Through my fingers

@onetree

(in celebration of my Steemit birthday today)



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Lovely poem and hoping you had a memorable Steemit anniversary 😀 Feeling so happy to read some of your posts again 😀 Take care.

Thank you @dimitrya123 it's been a while since I heard from you! I hope you are well?

Hi @onetree I'm not at my best but don't want to complain: it won't help. Complaints give so much bad energy. There are also so many people who are worse than me. Being as much positive as I can and doing my best to recover: that is what I want to focus on, with a big smile :) Thank you for being there and take care :) Bright blessings.

Talking and complaining are two different things. My prayers are with you. 💚

You are absolutely right. The last days were very off, even for talking. I am so happy to have more energy to do it again :). Thank you for your prayers :-).

namaste <3

Happy anniversary @onetree 😀😀😀

You are most welcome @onetree. 😀

A Belated Steemit Birthday Wish for you, and a Legitimate Birthday Wish for Sunday, next! BTW , Good Poem.

Thank you @awgbibb much appreciated! 😃

Happy anniversary - I like the poem.

Thank you, I appreciate it!

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Great poem :) and happy SBD > steem B day wow ♨️
Happy to see everything is going your way here on the platform

Happy birthday and congrats on the fab poem, :)

nice poetry my friend

Thank you I appreciate it!

Very nice post and picture. Happy Steemit Birthday! Upvoted and follow your account, greetings from Hungary!

Thank you!

Thank you so much! 🖋