Deep emotions you've injected here...
Your couplet style with their end rhymes are thrilling, gives a reason to read on.
Your refrain "When I am gone" is as emotionally gripping as it is structurally placed at the perfect spaces.
We, @poeticnest would love to read more from you. Deep poets like yourself are rare. Do follow us as we will follow your every post.
Good poetry.
(P.S. this kind of poetry outta be read at least twice to get to understand the hidden truth between each couplet.)