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RE: Walk With Me

in #poetry6 years ago (edited)

But words are merely
Cups of rain—
Do you want the mist?

Walk with me in the rain.

A push and pull kind of love represented here. The energetic shifts and the mercurial mood of the piece are notable. Wonderful penning:)

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It started off in my mind as an invitation but relationships are push-pull, I think, so as usual it ended up in another place :)