Hi @samueloption I really like this poem. I think it's fantastic how you use assonance within the verse structure. Have you read it out at a poetry performance yet? I think it would be great performance piece. Also, you may want to consider having a look at dsound and recording some of your poetry to share on steemit. The wordplay is also awesome in this poem:

fasten
then
the belt
of faith. . .

The elegant simplicity of this line is great, playing on 'fasten your seat belt'. Really nice!