Technologically Illiterate Addict

in #poetry8 years ago

This technologically illiterate
Is already addicted
Reminds me of being a kid
Making a fake bid
Searching for the mysteries that are hid'
'Den
Then again
I was always better at hidin'
Never too great at writin'
But have had a knack for rhymin'
Steem you have great timin'
My buddy told me crypto currency is a climbin'
That is something I enjoy
Ever since I was a little boy
That is where I have found some of my greatest joy
Being high up
Fill up my cup
Born an addict yup
But life ain't too rough
If you are a lil' tough
But abusing the body sometimes enough is enough
Time to find
The addiction of the mind
My friends have helped me to get on this grind
This addict
Is going to keep at it
I am the kind
To keep biting off and chewing on the rind
Staring contest with the sun till I am blind
Stubborn as can be
That is me
Just another technologically illiterate addict see

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Are you just dissin
Sit back and listen
There are a few things missin
But at least effort is a good transition
Thanks but I am not about competition
Or often using words that are basically repetition
But since you gave me more than permission
We have both failed our mission
Unless it is to just enjoy the pastime like fishin
Thinking we have perfection we are just wishin
Some things are about as real as superstition
Here and there that and this an'
Is it an apparition
In reality just another composition
Do it with conviction
Don't hold back no restriction
Setting limits equals constriction
24 real rhymes requires diction
And I just work in a kitchen
Is this a tasty dish then
Consonance ,assonance, onomatopoeia, what's your vision
Where is the preposition
Thanks for your position
We are all equal but I gladly grace you with a submission