Take a taste of Nostalgic Sonnet originally written by me

in #poetry6 years ago (edited)

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        Sonnet: Golden Youth
           Sajol Fuad

when l was only eleven or thirteen,
Had much freedom as was in parents lap.
If desired be anything, I could have been.
Thoroughly, got a scope to make my life map.
Played freely, went school in bound of elders;
Obtained love, care; must and must for a kid.
Was rude without thinking future shoulders.
Then to be soft I started to forbid.

ln twenty four I got the true-real fact;
Could use the golden time for my own shake,
Softly to elders surely could react.
Now, like a nest; my life, I have to make.
Promise any how to use every moment;
I know a way to shine being innocent.

Rhyme Scheme - ababcdcd efefgg
Written on - 7 January, 2018 (My Birthday)

Explanation - During the moment of adolescence a child gets a dramatic change. In that time he/she has a huge scope to use their life in a proper way. But they don't use the moment correctly. Their behaviour gives pain to the elders. In childhood they remain bound but when in adulthood they don't care anybody even anything else.

Later on they realize the tragedy of the reality of life. Then they mourn for their past life. They think if they used their time in good way l, they could get even a higher position in the society.

The poem is written based on my own life. If it matches with anybody, then I am not responsible.

Here is my keynote - Never misuse your valuable moment with unnecessary staff.

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You got a nice poem here bro. Keep doing what you know how to do. hope to read more from you.

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Nice poem regarding few important stage of our life. Seems like you have some nice talents here buddy

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