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RE: Spoken words and less unspoken

in #poetry7 years ago

Very powerful prose, @lidac. These lines in particular really caught my ear, so to speak -

I hate loving you and love is what I hate
You mind is a mess and cant keep things straight
I might be a shit in a darkness I live
But you will never receive what I have to give

Excellent rhythm to your words. Well done!

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Thank you I appreciate you stopping by..poem was written from a prolonged frustration I seem to have round this time..

I've had SAD (seasonal affective disorder) as well as depression and stuff for many years, so I hear that. Sending you hugs.

Unfortunately for me this type of disorder is not seasonal..thanks