Pearlescent Poems # 96: RIP DJOfficial Part 2 (Original Poem)
Though I'm not wise in the eyes of humans who do despise me
Sacrifice that Christ has made for all our lives, see
Darkness, an apartment, white parchment, filled it with smoking
Literal demons manifested into the open
Thank you for reading this post in its entirety, I hope you enjoyed it for what it's worth. Part 3 coming soon
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The people who need change the most are the ones to make it happen! This is a powerful message
Thank you very much, it is one of my favorite gifs that I have found and represents my views to a tee! Appreciate you checking out part 2 of this series
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"Present the truth, no excuse" right on brother ^_^!
Thank you very much bro, Holy Spirit can influence people to write some powerful things, and indeed I cannot have an excuse to represent the gospel and Christ's sacrifice.
Beautiful man, keep it up ;p
Definitely indeed, I plan on posting Part 3 soon, thank you for the encouragement
Will be on the look out !
Just posted part 3 :)
A strong message conveyed with beautiful words! Upvoted and Resteemed! Hope you keep on posting quality poetry on Steemit!
Thank you very much for the feedback, generous up vote and support. I definitely will keep posting more poetry for you all!
Check this one out if you have the time
https://steemit.com/openmic/@verbal-d/open-mic-night-wk-39-entry-rip-prodigy-of-mobb-deep-original-song
checked it out and upvoted! Great sense of rythm and flow, but it would be even better if your voice was recorded a little clearer, the music is a little bit dominant :/ But other than that, great job man! Keep up the good work!
By the way, our first contest is now online, so you may join if you like! :)
Thank you very much, I appreciate you taking time out to listen, I know the live performances recorded via phone are lacklustre, but I am currently working on the professional recording at the moment with an additional verse :) So that'll be a nice new perspective audibly. And thanks for the feedback and praise! I'll check out the new contest now. thanks for the invite
Hey darling! I read this to mom today and I played her your last couple of songs.
And I have a favor to ask.
I wrote a post about her, and by the title you will be expecting one thing (which in the beginning it will be, lol) but I share a story about faith at the end, and tomorrow I will be showing her the post and she loves reading the comments. So I know you eventually get to my posts, but this time I need you to go a little sooner, because you are definitely someone whose name she'll be looking for. Also my brother's song is in it, a song that relates to what I wrote at the end, so your awesome words about that will be highly appreciated too, for her and for him :)
Powerful poem. Christ dies so that we may live.
It so happens that I have also written a poem in memory of my late father in law who passed away a few days ago.
Yes indeed, He surely did. Thank you for your feedback, I will definitely give your poem a read now. I am sorry for your loss.
Beautiful stuff. I like the visual interplay with the words. It comes to life in a new way.
Thank you very much I truly appreciate the rewarding feedback. I love to play with the words as well as compliment them with powerful assisting gifs to enhance the experience.
It's so good! x
Thank you very much, I'm glad you liked it!