Poem / Only 5 Hours -_-

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Only 5 hours -__-

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My eyes are starting to sag
I feel like they are dragged down like lead bags
I need to find a quiet place
To wonder off into dream space

I'm feeling a bit nostalgic
It's been 20 hours since I last felt it
I just want to go to bed
Find my squishy pillow and rest my head

My brains feeling like a well worn tyre
Balded and used for too long
I need to fall into my bed
Sleep without waking to an alarm

I just want to find a room
That is sound proof
That will let my imagination run wild
While I snore like a 3 year old child

Soon there will be sleep
Just a couple minutes to strain my eyes
I just have to finish what I had planned
And then my brain can soar above the skies

A bright universal light
Each little star a memory
Unlocked by my night time melody

The world's starting to fade away
I can't remember much of what I did today
I've lost track of the sheep
My eyes have closed, I feel it, well deserved sleep


I only got in 5 hours
Damn I feel so sour

By Ethan
2017/07/27

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Nice composure...cld go with musical lyrics too

or maybe a Sound Poem ? Here's a collab of one ...... The Golden Spiral

I hear what your saying about the internet keeping you awake and unable to sleep. This whole thing with bitcoin hardfork has me going crazy!

I like this good stuff you got will be checking the rest

awesome...yielding to the calling of nature,
easily without requiring a suture,
for the sleep is a venture,
galvanising into the prepared drowsy future

Amazing! I love poetry comments :)

Very interesting.
I love poem too.
I followed you.
Have a nice day.^^

Thank you, I wish you the same :)

Well done man,Thanks for sharing you work with us.While you are here do your best , there will be a big promotion on sleep in the afterlife(if you believe in it ),Followed and upvoted

I can't wait to sleep forever ;)

We all want to sleep, but the Matrix we living in - doesn't letting us heh.
Just wrote about it today...
https://steemit.com/matrix/@davidconstantine/without-knowing-we-found-ourselves-enslaved-in-the-matrix

I'll check it out when I get to my desktop later on today:)

This is a good one and the last thing I read today :D
Its 11:13 pm in Germany and I got 6 hours. You know what the best thing is? By end of the day, the best thing is this feeling, the 1-2 seconds when you let go everything and smiles into your sleep. I would pay Steem for that :D
Good night, Steemit. (27.07.2017)

:) I only got in 5 hours last night so today will be full of power naps

Powernap feels good, too.

I'll sleep when I'm dead :) No actually, the older I get, the more I like my naps...

I'm still pretty young but sleep is becoming more and more important to me as the days tick by