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RE: Storms—Both human and Natural

in #poetry7 years ago

Another fine poem, John. I, too, am ambivalent about moods & physiognomy & such... And, yet, we are susceptible, the inner to the outer.

To people who do not believe in astrology (which I only believe in partly) I say: but look at the influence of the moon on the ocean and we, too, are afterall contained bodies of water...

Back to your poem, nice cross-cross work you do, going back & forth to inscrutable states within/ without & their invisible/indivisible link.

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thank you, @yahialababidi - Yes, we are inextricably tied to our environment and our metaphors for moods are drawn from the elements - I agree we carry a world within to the world without, hence the criss-crossing back & forth