Poem #1 "THE OWL" My first ever Poem on Steemit!!!

in #poetry7 years ago (edited)

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I started writing poems a long time ago and i never thought of sharing my work on steemit until now :)

The Owl:

The normals are sleeping just like everyday

Choosing every night over day anyway

No one else, only the quite four walls

No is here, no one talks

Self discussions over cheap talk of men

Mind cleared, soul goes zen

A desk, a white paper and a pen

The sound of rain, iner meditation

Sorrows try to comeback without hesitation

A thousand meanings behind a quite feeling

Story books, a soul that's healing

Eyes wide open from dusk till dawn

The world is dead while alone

The night is a place full of tasks

Better than a society with bunch of masks.

-Yahya Oulad Aouid

Any feedback will be much appreciated <3

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