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RE: Ontology / water condensing

in #poetry6 years ago

Splendid poem separated into two subtitles threading the same seam. The essence of being is rescued among the various scenarios that can surround it. There is something unique in the world that is so special, something like "the eye girl" of a God attentive to what happens in his world and understands or stimulates the small steps of his creatures, guiding them and sharing his flight, eagle with its chicks, the spear of the nest as many times as necessary, until they fly. Therefore, this poem expresses satisfaction, accompaniment, but also, knowledge of its own process, its own journey, the raison d'être that is beyond words. Magistral "ontological" penetration. I hug you, @d-pend.

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I am honored to receive your poetic response - the abstract universal becomes real in our reflections @zeleiracordero. Suddenly vague ideation, images on images piled becomes vivid, now blurs like subtle cinematography. The small steps of creatures contain precious facets of the worldgem, revealing its face through the trillions of lives teeming upon its surface.