Great! I know that there is a lot to learn here. Steemit will need to make some sort of instruction/training available before we get out of Beta stage I think. As it is, unless you have a mentor or do lots of searching for articles on how to succeed in Steemit, its easy to make mistakes.
p.s. You may want to space out your sentences and include occasional pics.
Read some other successful posts to see what they do for formatting, etc.
Also interact with other people on their posts and make friends.
All the best!