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RE: [English] They changed the world: Eugene Shoemaker and Carl Sagan.

in #science8 years ago (edited)

Nice post about these legends @paperbackwriter.
Edit: Suggestions, try to separate your paragraphs a bit more. Right now they look a bit like a wall of text and it makes reading a bit more challenging then it rightfully should be. Maybe Add a heading or two in there when you switch topics ( just for ease of following your direction, not that your writing is unclear).

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Yes, I was also thinking that it would be better to do it that way, I'll take it into account for the following posts. Thank you very much for your comment!