I love Gos!! Eye level with Tezrin, who's on horseback - wow!
Tezrin is a bad ass, giving orders to kill every last man, woman, or child.
I trust he will make a character arc by the end of the saga.
An Ice Age is ending, and new era of blood and conquest begins.
Tremendous!
Your natural storytelling skills, in combination with your ability to "use or lose" suggestions from fiction workshoppers, distinguishes this writing from the multitude of stories out there. I'm impressed, and it's not easy to impress the Rhino. KEEP WRITING!!! You're the real deal!