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RE: ADSactly Sci-Fi : Outer Earth Series 'The One Eyed Man (Part 8)'
The description of Albright's transit experience in that transport and in the place (dining room) seems to me well presented. The meeting of our protagonist with his former companion of mission, Brag, allows to know a little about the past of Albright, in particular, which was saved by that one in an occasion. As I was reading the dialogue between the two characters, I conjectured that Brag might intervene as Albright's antagonist in his current mission. Following your story, @zentalk.
That's great! Happy you enjoyed those scenes! I think you sensed something about Brag. I was hoping readers would sort of scratch their head at least and wonder if he may possibly end up playing a bigger role later on in the storyline. Good idea!