Hello, I can see you are new on SteemChurch tag. Nice to have you around. God's love for us is evident in our lives.
I have some suggestions for you too. Try to work on your paragraphs, add spaces before and after images. You don't have to use "..." after every snetences.
Thanks sir..... For the correction, and if there is any mistake have made sir, just tell me, and I will adhere to it sir.....