I just joined a couple of days ago and I'm pretty sure I upvoted on your post but maybe I haven't got enough steem yet to make an impression on it.
Just keep doing what you enjoy and take your own advice. Don't just chuck up stuff your not happy with just for the sake of posting.
The format above looks more like a poem layout than a blog post. Maybe justify it left. Other than that it looks ok to me. Hope this helps.