Hi @booster916. Since there were no other submission when I logged in this morning, AND to help you out (because I know you are serious in writing your posts), I have proofed/edited yours and sent you the edited document via Steemit Chat. In the spirit of giving I have chosen your post, but will do this as a "one- off". The reason is that, although I DO have experience editing "English as a second language" writing, they require a lot of extra work which is NOT related to the actual content itself. I suggest you read my recent post about the excellent Grammarly (free) program : https://steemit.com/steemit/@transcript-junky/steemit-teleworker-powertools-2-grammarly. This program will help you clean up your writing closer towards "native speaker" writing. Keep up the good work. @transcript-junky