Haikoi

in #steemitachievers7 years ago (edited)

Title: Haikoi

haikoi_lapizlazuli.jpg

Water still flowing
Swathed by my flayed white wings
Im just a coy koi

Im barely drifting
In media thrown with wishings
Im not a man's toy

I am still dreaming
For me to have good tidings
Not from selfish ploy

Note: I drew this fish last year, and made a haiku for it. I used an ordinary bond paper so it looked warped and a kid's watercolor pencil (Faber-Castell). I kinda enjoyed making them them!

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Ganyan tayo e (ahahaha) apir!

Hahahaha teach me senpai hehehe

Sabi ko nga magaling ka na..practice practice practice (siguro?) O.o;

Hehehe di ko forte drawing po ehhh practice pa hehe

Gandaa!! Nahihirapan ako sa ganyang rhyming style. But anyway, I suggest dapat poetry yung main tag mo. Then if you do arts, step by step. Benta dito yan. Tapos may poetry contest si @deeday31. Hehe baka gusto mong sumali. (Shameless plug alert!) Haha.

Paano main tag? Unang tag dapat poetry? Sige next time kukuhaan ko na step by step (sana maalala ko). Uy sige pasali, paano ba? Thanks ng marami! Gudam

Oo dapat poetry. If arts, art then drawing. Parang nagtutorial ka lang so may materials used and work in progress.

Eto yung post ni diday. Follow mo yung mechanics. Hehe

https://steemit.com/dnwpoetrycontest/@deeday31/dnw-poetry-contest-3-new-theme-and-announcement-of-winners

Nice work. Galing mo.

Thank you po kuya, kayo rin po.