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RE: 💭 How to Remember Names: Sophie Turner aka Sansa Stark (English & Deutsch)
Great stories. Here are some thoughts:
The "head turner" part is fantastic But the way you put it in your story is a bit disconnected. You just mention that she is a head turner. But you should make it an essential part of your story:
Sansa Stark is watching Game of Thrones on the Syfy channel and when her character appears everyone in the room turns their heads to the TV.
This is better for the visualization.
What does sofi mean in Dutch?
Sofi is your social security number
Ah ok cool. Check out the two new articles from today to collect your SBD. :)