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RE: MY FEARS : Day 40 of the 100 Days of Poetry Challenge
UP UP UP, that was good man. I like this line here "My emotions fell deep in the sea like an anchor" I can just imagine it falling fast to the seabed. Good rhyming, made perfect sense and easy to understand . ( I think I need to revisit rhyming and get out of this free from critiques said i should do.
It's good to practice different writing patterns... Be it with rhythm or without.
Thank you so much for the feedback my Jamaican friend.... It feels good to get comment from a great poet.