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RE: POETRY | DAY 33 | Travelling Man Blues

Some days stand above the pack,
the remainder awaiting shipment to some place else.

Great lines, with just the right amount of abstraction. Each of us make our own way through life, although there are places, stretches of road, where we come together and walk united for a little while. Thanks for letting us walk a while with you :)

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I do like a bit of abstraction, although when overdone it can be somewhat confusing. Even to this author. Thanks for joining me on this journey, always happy for new and enlightening input.