POETRY | DAY 29 | Again
Again, poetry by @naquoya.
Day 29 of 100 for @d-pend's Poetry Challenge
Again
Going around
in circles,
like lava
down a drain
that tears at the hope
of ever coming back here
again.
A distance,
foreclosing
and bearing down from above.
Disturbed teardrops
that resonate
like the dark side
of love.
Passed out.
Returned.
Filtered all that remains.
And wait for the day
when it passes by
again.
Reading Notes: This poetry is new and written exclusively for the 100 Day Poetry Challenge, which is explained in more detail here and here.
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I like you to use symbols about life. Nice poetry.
Keep writing for the challenge.
Thank you.
I love this poetry of life and vision. Good job, friend @naquoya
Thank you kindly :)
"Lava down the drain that tears at the hope" thats a wicked line man. Splendid imagery in this piece. good pic choices too, especially the first one.
Glad you like that line. Sometimes I am pleased with them too, and that is one that captured well what I was trying to say. It doesn't always happen like that! Thanks :)
Interesting lines to be read a few times as they circle down the drain - should I grasp a metaphor? Ah, it's too late. It is out of reach.
Haha, yes catch it now, or lose it. At least until the next reading. Thanks for your comment.
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